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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Tue Aug 18, 2009 7:04 am | |
| Oh don't worry jesse...There will be more to read... | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Tue Aug 18, 2009 7:09 am | |
| I caught in a flashback, As i gaze out the bars, As i smell the breezes, As i touch the cold wall, As i think why i'm here?
The memory my only legacy, To my friends, To my families, To my spouse.
My only will, To see them smile, To see them grow, To see them success, More importantly, To see them found happiness.
Follow not my step of conducts, Follow not my step of choices, Follow not my step of pleasures, Follow not my step of crimes.
You have a future, Use it well. You have a dream, Achieve it while able. You have a choice, Choose wisely. You have a life, Live a clean and happy life.
Criminal's Cry *Written* During.22/05/2009 By.Me | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Tue Aug 18, 2009 7:17 am | |
| Once you have said,i'm with you.Once you have said,i'll help you.Once you have said,i'll support you.Now i have say,You killed me. Aren't those word,from you?Aren't those work,from you?Aren't those deed,from you?Aren't these prove,from me? While you cross your word,I'm hurted.While you missed your work,I'm beaten.While you do your deed,I'm dying.While i am dying,you are celebrating. Why you lie,to me?Why you ignored,me?Why you doing this,to me?What have i done,to you? Aren't i'm your,friend?Haven't I protected,you?Isn't i rescued,you?Is this how you,repay me? What you lie,I'll bear in mind.What you ignore,I'll mark by flesh.What you do,I'll mark by soul.What you have done,will pay by blood. You'll see,what's your price.You'll taste,what is fear.You'll feel,what is pain.You'll know,I'm your nightmare. My disappointment,your fear.My hurt,your pain.My hatred,your judgement.My injuries,your impending hell. Oh yes,you will come to know,the real me.You will see,the other side.You will feel,my endless hatred.You will taste,me hellish rage. For traitor will find,no peace.That mean you will find,no comfort.You will find,no shelter.You will not escape,your death. By my hand...
The Betrayed release,Traitor's End (Poetry of Betrayal) *Written* During .25/05/2009 By .Me
This poetry is very particular on the feeling of vengence...Afterall...So many betrayal i suffered i really wish there is way..But writting this was the best way~ | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Tue Aug 18, 2009 7:24 am | |
| Hey hey guys~I always welcome good poetry here and i will always glad to reply you~Thx Jesse,Rui and Seth willing to write your mind to me that make me glad to reply you all~All of your poem i really love~
To Jesse: Thanks you really to write that friendship poem to me...Really appreciate it~ Nicely state We shall stand as mate...Very catchy so far i have read yours 3 times~
To Mice mice Rui: Nice work on the sound of rediculous,I like it and it do make me want to reply straight after i have read it atleast twice ho ho ho...Make more nia i will be waiting~
To Seth: Hey welcome to the writting party~~Don't worry...Cause you say ow gadw bless you with a poem there is my que to reply you 'I will bless you with a shiny poem' haha~Good good~ | |
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Séth Smoking HoT!
Number of posts : 199 Registration date : 2009-07-28
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Wed Aug 19, 2009 10:19 pm | |
| wuwuwu...bless for pity oni~sobsob | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:02 am | |
| Hey seth not really bless for pity~But i really want to reply your poem too~ Afterall i love to reply no matter what type of poem~Friend what Seth we should stand shoulder to shoulder like how Jesse said in her poem~We stand together~ | |
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jesse Rockin Hard
Number of posts : 48 Registration date : 2009-08-10
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Thu Aug 20, 2009 2:19 am | |
| lol...
yeah...!!
friends...!!
why bless for pity only?.. dun really understand..!!
nway, do u really understand my poem?.. heh!! | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Thu Aug 20, 2009 4:26 am | |
| Kinda~He thought i wrote my reply out of pity....I really wish to reply it ge~~
Come Jesse shed some light to them who don't understand you poem~ | |
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jesse Rockin Hard
Number of posts : 48 Registration date : 2009-08-10
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Thu Aug 20, 2009 3:53 pm | |
| "You've kept these words inside, Unable to turn them written, You turned from that one shoe, Fallen from the stone step, and gaze to the open sea."
This means: you are at a house front, you wore your shoes and when u try to walk out fall from the stone step (the lil stairs in front of the door), then u rise ur head after u fall and see the road infront, realise that the world is wide, so flat.... | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Thu Aug 20, 2009 4:09 pm | |
| Well...The horizon is wider than we ever know it~ | |
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jesse Rockin Hard
Number of posts : 48 Registration date : 2009-08-10
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:29 pm | |
| heh.. yeah...!!
so lazy to type the meaning for each paragraphs | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Fri Aug 21, 2009 2:15 am | |
| Don't need to stress yourself jesse...Slowly...Can just summarise the whole ma...Don't need one by one~ | |
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-Rui- Reborned
Number of posts : 263 Location : don really rmb XD Job/hobbies : ro-ing ??@@ Registration date : 2008-07-10
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Fri Aug 21, 2009 3:18 pm | |
| WOw... i see both of u .. sam and jesse have similar talent wo~~~ whuuuU~~ u two so "geng" ... all i do in here jus spam XD HAHA | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Fri Aug 21, 2009 3:45 pm | |
| Lol...... *Shy shy*Where got geng?Just something to write only... | |
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Séth Smoking HoT!
Number of posts : 199 Registration date : 2009-07-28
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sat Aug 22, 2009 11:49 am | |
| *silent* - Spoiler:
spam!!!!spam!!!!spam!!!
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sat Aug 22, 2009 1:50 pm | |
| Ya ya ya...Seth you been quiet for quite a while~Anything going on for you? | |
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Séth Smoking HoT!
Number of posts : 199 Registration date : 2009-07-28
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sun Aug 23, 2009 12:01 pm | |
| owh~noting..ill juz spam wit quiet manner~lol
mayb ill on9 less anyway..juz entered uni.. | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sun Aug 23, 2009 2:21 pm | |
| Hey that is a good news seth~I'm happy for you buddy~ | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Tue Aug 25, 2009 5:19 am | |
| Hm....Quite awhile...Maybe i should post a few new one later... | |
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Séth Smoking HoT!
Number of posts : 199 Registration date : 2009-07-28
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Tue Aug 25, 2009 12:00 pm | |
| Owhkayz~ bring it up buddy~ | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Tue Aug 25, 2009 3:00 pm | |
| Have you ever listen to,the rain?Have you ever touch,the rain?Have you ever dream of,the rain?Have you ever under,the rain? The rain signified many emotion,some say it bad,some say it saddening,some say is nuisance,most say it is peaceful. Those who listened,find tranquility.Those who touched,find peace.Those who dreamed,find rest.Those who under,find cleansing. Rain give peace,never take away.Rain give rest,little can provide.Rain give calmness,some can manage.Rain give cleansing,few can feel. Listen to it,once.Touch it,once.Dream about it,once.Feel under it,once. The rhythem,fill emptiness.The feeling,gave relaxation.The dream,gave peaceful sleep.The experience,wipe away tears. Hear it.Feel it.Dream it.Experience it. Let your ear,be filled.Let your sense,be peaceful.Let your dream,be calmed.Let your experience,be open. Embrace it,like roses.Need it,like lilies.Enjoy it,like cherries blossom.Dream it,like me. The soul of rains.
Solances of Rain (Poetry of Rain) *Written* During .27/05/2009 by .Me
Here is a one that written while raining and I love rain too~ | |
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jesse Rockin Hard
Number of posts : 48 Registration date : 2009-08-10
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:04 am | |
| i wanna dreanm..... to rest =D
hope it is not a horror dream.. | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:05 am | |
| Tell me about it Jesse...Share your mind~ | |
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jesse Rockin Hard
Number of posts : 48 Registration date : 2009-08-10
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:07 am | |
| nah... its so early.. still not sleeping?
nah...
im tired.. later around 6am i wanna sleep..
hopping for a good reest | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:08 am | |
| My goodness....You better try now..Not later | |
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