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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:08 am | |
| Hey hey guys~~I'm thinking of posting some of my handwritten poetries...Anyone interested?? | |
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Séth Smoking HoT!
Number of posts : 199 Registration date : 2009-07-28
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Wed Aug 05, 2009 10:18 am | |
| just post^^ my pleasure to hear some poetry ere~ | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:05 pm | |
| Never once this happen,to me.Never once thought it will happen,to me.Never once I felt,so shattered.Never once I felt,so helpless. The brokeness within me,the scar of past.The emptiness within me,the scar of present.My sorrow,the fruit of past.My tears,the fruit of present. Is this all,your game?Is this all,your fun?Is this all,your pleasure?Is my down fall,your laughter? Have I wronged,you?Have I failed,you?Have I provoked,you?Is my tears,your humour? Have not storms and hails,I shelter you?Have not rains and thunders,I protected you?Have not I cared,for you?Have not I give,for you? My joy,torned down.My smile,shattered away.My love,broken aside.My tears,stream a river. My tears of Sorrow,filled my soul.My tears of Rage,filled my heart.My tears of Anguish,filled my being.I am,but a shell,of my former self. All my tears,held a meaning.My sorrow,like the root.My rage,like the trunk.My anguish,like the branch. My sorrows,have no end.My rages,have no limit.My anguish,have no depth.How I wish,it all end,with me. Let my tears,stream to the sea.Where no one,can see.Where no one,will know.Where i,can be forgotten. This is my tears.This is my sorrow.This is my story.This is...My tears of Sorrow...
Tears of Sorrow (Poetry of the Tears) *The Tears project* During .29/05/2009 By .Me | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:13 pm | |
| Once I am peaceful, Once I am compose, Once I am loving, Once I am compassionate, Those were memories now.
Now I am provoked, Now I am restless, Now I am violent, Now I am heartless, This is reality.
I fight it before, Now I am giving in, I despise it before, Now I am enjoying it. I held it in before, Now I am embracing it.
What is it I fought, What is it I despised, What is it I held in, What is it I embraced, My tears of rage.
I been wronged, I been betrayed, I been isolated, I been judged, My tears seen it all.
My violence my comfort, My sorrow my inspiration, My rage my relieve, My tears of rage is my feeling, Leave me be who i want to be, Let me be alone as you have wanted.
Tear of Rage *The Tears project* Written .28/05/2009 By .Me | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:14 pm | |
| See how my heart break, See how my love burn, See how my joy fade, See how my anguish rise, Let me cry my anguish.
The pieces of my heart stung, The ashes of my love choke, The memory of my joy hurt, The tears of my anguish flow, Let my tears wet my face.
The two black march I went, One hurt my soul, The other hurt my being, People who is close is fading, While my tears is for them.
Oh,hurt is my soul, Broken is my heart, Pain is my being, Wish I were the fading one, For my anguish is infinite.
My soul become my sorrow, My heart become my thorn, My being become my pain, The Tears of Anguish filled my eye, Oh,how I wish my end is close.
Oh,Let it go and let it flow, Let it stream down the sadden soul, Let it flow to the broken heart, Let it moist the ashen love, Let it be my Tears of Anguish.
Tears of Anguish *The Tears project* *Written* During .29/05/2009 By .Me | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:16 pm | |
| This is my favourite project even until now~My favourite poem until now also is my Tears of Anguished~~~Give me some feedbacks or comment guys~ | |
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-Rui- Reborned
Number of posts : 263 Location : don really rmb XD Job/hobbies : ro-ing ??@@ Registration date : 2008-07-10
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-Rui- Reborned
Number of posts : 263 Location : don really rmb XD Job/hobbies : ro-ing ??@@ Registration date : 2008-07-10
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Wed Aug 05, 2009 8:01 pm | |
| I love Tears of sorrow .. im impressed by your poem... really nice lor... but too much " ? " question... lol
Parts i love most - " Let my tears,stream to the sea.Where no one,can see.Where no one,will know.Where i,can be forgotten "
" My soul become my sorrow, My heart become my thorn, My being become my pain, The Tears of Anguish filled my eye, Oh,how I wish my end is close.
Oh,Let it go and let it flow, Let it stream down the sadden soul, Let it flow to the broken heart, Let it moist the ashen love, Let it be my Tears of Anguish." - quoted
oh sam.... im going to quote all this poem XD | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Wed Aug 05, 2009 11:40 pm | |
| Ya mice...I been quite sad,depress, and a lot of thing happen to me that have not been nice too~~Though all that which a lot of negative come to me which i use it to write poems which atleast stop me from thinking suiciding hahaha~~~ | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Wed Aug 05, 2009 11:42 pm | |
| Haha...Thanks Mice...Why Tears of Sorrow have so much '?'...Cause it contain most of the question I wish to ask many people when the same thing happen to them~~The quote of Tears of Anguish is my fav also hahah~~~ | |
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Séth Smoking HoT!
Number of posts : 199 Registration date : 2009-07-28
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Fri Aug 07, 2009 12:37 pm | |
| Nice poem u got there, sure breathtaking. And rui's suggestion gud oso, y dun try? | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:26 pm | |
| Posting on the star??? 1st I dunno how...2nd are you sure about this?Breathtaking...That is a comment i don't hear everyday also... | |
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Séth Smoking HoT!
Number of posts : 199 Registration date : 2009-07-28
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sat Aug 08, 2009 12:14 am | |
| ya im sure..annyway there noting to lose anyway - Spoiler:
except some money for expenses mayb
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sat Aug 08, 2009 2:12 am | |
| Ya...I guess so....But i really dunno how.... | |
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-Rui- Reborned
Number of posts : 263 Location : don really rmb XD Job/hobbies : ro-ing ??@@ Registration date : 2008-07-10
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sat Aug 08, 2009 2:38 pm | |
| - Gothicus wrote:
- Posting on the star??? 1st I dunno how...2nd are you sure about this?Breathtaking...That is a comment i don't hear everyday also...
oww... send by email de ... i try to get the email for u Sam ~ cus for so far i had read... i think urs is much better than them XD and Sam... think more positive stuff.. u will see the world a better place and make u feel better... at least not so depressive... dont stuck urself in the darkness @@ | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sat Aug 08, 2009 3:32 pm | |
| Thx mice~~ So far you hav read huh...Cool~ Hm....I am a positive person but I'm a dark theme based poet...Cause some people dunno how to express their own emotion,For example some people can keep a truck load sadness which they don't want to tell anybody and ended up very depress and silly...Sometime if people willing to step into their shoes for once maybe they will open to people one day~~~ I used to stuck in darkness and i really ok with it actually...I express everything with the verses i write~~ | |
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-Rui- Reborned
Number of posts : 263 Location : don really rmb XD Job/hobbies : ro-ing ??@@ Registration date : 2008-07-10
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sat Aug 08, 2009 4:29 pm | |
| thta's pretty good... thats a good start ... remember sam... anything... happen... u can talk to us... we are here... ok ?? ^^ if writing poem make u feel better.. then keep it on ~~ ^^ | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sat Aug 08, 2009 4:34 pm | |
| Ya....You and seth have been telling for awhile.....Writting poetry is like a past time....Afterall i have wrote 40+ so far....If any emotion or feeling i missed out.....That will be interesting~ | |
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Séth Smoking HoT!
Number of posts : 199 Registration date : 2009-07-28
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sat Aug 08, 2009 9:16 pm | |
| ya..poem is one of good way to make to express us feeling tho | |
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-Rui- Reborned
Number of posts : 263 Location : don really rmb XD Job/hobbies : ro-ing ??@@ Registration date : 2008-07-10
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sun Aug 09, 2009 3:48 am | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sun Aug 09, 2009 12:55 pm | |
| impressive find Mice....But I think I'll go that far when i think it is ok enough.... | |
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Séth Smoking HoT!
Number of posts : 199 Registration date : 2009-07-28
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:54 pm | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sun Aug 09, 2009 7:55 pm | |
| Thanks Seth...Cause those site are like...WOW.... | |
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-Rui- Reborned
Number of posts : 263 Location : don really rmb XD Job/hobbies : ro-ing ??@@ Registration date : 2008-07-10
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sun Aug 09, 2009 10:55 pm | |
| Btw , sam... if there's voting allow.. tell me.. i will vote XD hahahah i so others too. | |
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Gothicus LDO Core Freak
Number of posts : 309 Age : 34 Location : Earth,Malaysia,Perak,Ipoh Job/hobbies : Cashier and a single Dad~Hobby too much~ Registration date : 2009-07-25
| Subject: Re: Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~ Sun Aug 09, 2009 11:42 pm | |
| Haha....Thank mice...Hm...timr to post a few more up~~ | |
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