Anybody is interested with Poetries?Cause I wrote a few~

Rockin Hard Number of posts : 48 Registration date : 2009-08-10

You've kept these words inside,
Unable to turn them written,
You turned from that one shoe,
Fallen from the stone step,
and gaze to the open sea.

The west sea shines with light at the end of the day,
Just as the world is beautiful even just before it disappears,
At the end of the road,
You're not alone,

The soul of sunset,
The darkening sea slowly washes your feet.
Gradually grow used to these words inside you.

One must be enlighten,
Life grows bringing endless hopes and,
For it we indulge,
Only to foresee the twilight.

As mates,
We shoulder each other through sea of flame,
Leaving non vulnerable,
For it we shall.

and we shall.

jesse

Read fast need 10 mins....That is a wonder...

The catchy part is interesting no?

Jesse thx for the poem you wrote for me...Here one in reply but nothing to do with my own work..

Though Flame and Fire,
Were never same,
When the 2 become 1,
An Inferno will be born.

Though the wind,
Does not part with water,
But The water ride the wind,
A storm will be created.

When a friend in distress,
You decided to help,
Your bond with him shall,
Be evermore strengthen.

Though you and I,
Are different in person,
but there is one thing is similiar,
Our friendship is our ONE..

Thx Jesse this is for you~

Rockin Hard Number of posts : 48 Registration date : 2009-08-10

no time to write 1... gotta go to class...

later evening back

It is ok Jesse...Take your time...

Rockin Hard Number of posts : 48 Registration date : 2009-08-10

tonite i will be late......!!

my class finishes at 730.. then i will rush back to play clan war...

dun kick me out pls..

Don't panic and rush Jesse....
It is not end of the world if you are late...

Quote :: You saw laughter,I see crying.You saw joy,I see sorrow.You saw smile,I see pain.
When i smiles,I'm in pains.When i laugh,I'm in tears.When i'm happy,I'm sorrowful.

Part i like the most.. XD .. well done sam.. but i still see the darkness and sadness in poem. XD

WOW jesse ~!!!! u're good too !!!! XD nice ler....

haha...I see...Really good meh?Too bad i was that sad during that time...

Jesse is indeed good~I wrote my reply for her poem too~

Rockin Hard Number of posts : 48 Registration date : 2009-08-10

-Rui- wrote:: WOW jesse ~!!!! u're good too !!!! XD nice ler....

thx... *blushing** sam is better... he writes alot

i like to write...

but.. no time lately...

so busy with classes and society events.

lol...I'm not any better....
like to write then use some time to write a bit by bit then...

Do you read my reply poem for your poem?It kinda match~

Smoking HoT! Number of posts : 199 Registration date : 2009-07-28

wouch ~so many peom i missed~takes 30 min to them all swt~

Ya i think u two got great poem there

Haha....*Short bow*Thx seth...I think if people write poem to reply me,i think i can reply with a poem too...That 2 poem can be a related poem~~Haha~

There was a voice,
There were a call,
There is a man,
Who shout the voice and call.

They look up,
then they ducked,
then they crawled,
then they picked themself and ran.

Over the sand they dashed,
On the sand they died,
At the buzz they are torned,
At the boom they are shattered.

They were whole,
When they go.
They were pieces,
When they home.

Most have fall,
Few are home.
Tear have shed,
For blood have spilled.

They were there,
For you and i.
They were killed,
For you and me.

Price of Freedom
During .23/05/2009
By .Me
*Inspired by Omaha Beach*
*Dedicated to the soldier who fought for us*

The mountain looks bright,promises light.The plain looks nice,promises joy.The ocean looks clear,promises safety.The heart looks peace,promises truth.
Darkness come,the mountain looks dark.Suffering come,the plain looks down.Storm come,The ocean looks violent.Deceit come,the heart looks broke.
Aren't you see,a better day?Aren't you say,a beautiful sight?Aren't you hear,a calm ocean?Aren't you promise,a peaceful heart?
Day by day,you con.Week by week,you lied.Month by month,you deceive.Year by year,you disappoint.
Is there no virue,in you?In there no peace,with you?Is there no truth,around you?Is there no heart,within you?
Have not the hills,show you love?Have not the land,show you compassion?Have not the sea,show you peace?Have not my heart,show you truth?
You believe,but what you see?You receive,but what you give?You enjoy,but what you do?You have lied,is what you do.
Reveal what,is wrong.Tell what,is truth.Do what,is right.Be not,the liar.

(Poetry of Liar)
Liar's Warning
*Written*
During .22/05/2009
By .Me

Last edited by -Rui- on Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:24 pm; edited 1 time in total

NOTHING TO DO.. SO write something silly

The sea is blue,
cant swim without the fin.
I bought so much glue,
just to stick the magazine.

I know this poem does not make sense,
but hope it created a bond.
If i ever make you feel tense,
Just flee yourself and gone.

A , B , C , D , E,
A and B stay with Me.
One two three four five,
Six gonna make me feel fine.

All the thing i wrote,
Make u roll down the road.
This dont spell with I D K,
Not i dont know but i dont Care.

Feel the Air,
Feel the Funfair.

Give me PC Hardware,
Not the bear.

Enough for the Joking,
Im not kidding.

Read this poem with Rhythm,
Dont read with sound's freedom.

HA HA HA i end here now,
I know you wont give this a bow.

-END-

The sound of Ridiculous - Rui
August 17, 2009 ( 1:06 am )

Like the budding Rose,
All beginning mark by beauty,
Let the word flow out your mind,
Let it be a picture of masterpiece.

Poetry of Senses,
Is no poetry of art,
Fair child write and draw,
Masterpieces with art and mind.

For each letter held,
A special bond for you,
Like the lily need water,
Your letter needed each other.

The care of one with word,
Maybe differ one from the other,
Roll up the sleeve and wipe the sweat,
Your journey with the word have just begun.

Feel the wind like,
The rhythem of the rain,
Given a choice you will blossom,
For you may bloom is total beauty.

For one think a verse is a joke,
the one might a be foolish bee,
For not they see a beautiful roses,
For what I see you are priceless jewel.

Every ending held a beginning,
Upon seeing your ending,
No less more i see beginning,
For here the show have just begun.

The Acknowledgement - Samuel
August 17,2009 (1:55am)

Here is your reply Rui...I acknowledge your poem with a poem~*Short bow*

Smoking HoT! Number of posts : 199 Registration date : 2009-07-28

Lol..rui make sound of ridiculous~really make me laugh...hahahaha

I think I want try too~

Rui said A,B,C,
And then 1,2,3
I thought I saved thee,
but instead I cut the tree~.~??

wind is moving air,
sound is vibration,
light is everywhere
and that was said by einstein...?

i got really noting to say,
nor can make any good poem,
but i really want to share,
anything wit a gud rhythm

green is nice,
blue is nice too,
brown is pretty nice,
this d oni much i can do...

wait..that's not right,
eventhough its funny but still a shame,
owh gawd gimme light,
bless me with gud poem~

Follow the wind,
Play the harp,
For you 2 follow the wind,
And the wind flew you east.

Like a geese fly north,
Like the grease power the car,
Though reason not a meason,
Though Mitten not a kitten.

Follow up the flow,
Stream it down the road,
Like the traffic fly the way,
As the fishes being freeze.

Feel the colour,
Like wind containing colour,
Like the clay is orange,
Like the sea is blue.

No way that not right,
Funny filled the air tonight,
Sheding light like shedding scale,
I will bless you with a shiny poem~

Here is your reply Seth.Good work~

Smoking HoT! Number of posts : 199 Registration date : 2009-07-28

Oh my god,
i never tot u reply,
thanks for that,
i glad i tried.

Haha...Never thought i would?Haven't i said i will reply any poem with a poem?I'm glad you try to seth~

Rockin Hard Number of posts : 48 Registration date : 2009-08-10

wow.. so cool... u guys can write too...

!!!

but im lazy at the moment...

hehe

IT is ok jesse...You are not lazy....
So great to see them started writing..

Rockin Hard Number of posts : 48 Registration date : 2009-08-10

yeah... enjoy reading...

hope for more.